image: epic mahoney
"Hello, Dad?"
"Dad?"
"Dad."
"Dad, I."
"DadIloveyou."
"DadIloveyou."
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An Afterword:
I must admit that, given my penchant for the comedic take, I did
at first want to go with:
"Yes. Yes, Mildred. I will bring home milk.
No. I haven't forgotten"
but......I didn't.
;)
28 comments:
I love both of them! I have to say I enjoy your comedic takes!
Funny si always good but so is emotion.
Love them both, especially the second!
Both are fun....nice.
Oh my, this made me cry. I lost my father when I was 10 and that is 31 years ago. I wanna say those words repeatedly to him. Something that I was not able to tell him...
Love this...
JJRod'z
I like it. Would be a good small stone if you wanted to call it that.
Christopher- I love small stones. I missed them this year. :)
JJ- Remembering tears are good. My Blessings to you.
Both are great = )
Great fun!
I loved the last dad line! I prefer funny, too.........!
I enjoyed the contrast. The first poem is a positive expression of caring and the second, more negative. Both are everyday happenings and just about everyone can identify with either scenario. Thank you for sharing this expressive response x2.
great stuff...! :)
rob kistner
Image & Verse
aww...lovely tender write...in the calling of dad....and lol on the milk...in one ear and out...
:) sometimes that's all we need to hear :)
I like both!
Love 'em both, but in very different ways.
Two opposing emotions here.
So packed with feeling...amazing..and with just a few words..excellent.
Could the first one say "Dad, aye!" instead of "Dad,I"?
Sounds the same, but makes more sense to a Brit!
Two for the price of one!
l liked both angles.
=)
Excellent words!
Anna :o]
They are both cute 'n' funny. Thank you
Ah now what was it which prevented him from shopping for milk? His mind too full of ‘stuff’?
indeed both very good.....thanks for sharing once again
Just so you know; my mother's name is Mildred.
;)
rel
Dig this!
So sweet...
Very gripping! It is amazing how strongly such few words can make one feel. Well done!
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