..hello.. my first time here, i think.. i must agree with you... very true that words are not meant to be kept..but rather be expressed... great read!(:
Oh I understand this but I type it after I write it it is a good thing as I am a two fingered slow typer and I would never get the story out so explode would be the word I would use also. Am I the only one that writes on napkins and t paper when I have too? :) B
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This is so very true... Same here... Love it!
JJRod'z
I adored the simplicity of this. I wish I would have gotten to the point as you did--so quickly and with so much ooomph!
Excellent. But explosions have consequences.
You got me to laugh out loud...
oh my gawd if that isn't just dead on... :)
Well.....I'm sure we ALL know the feeling! lol
To Martin: But what if the explosion IS the consequence?!
;)
Funny! But I think that looks more like a spit-take. ;-)
My Magpie this week is Poet.
To Mimi: the ultimate spit-take reel.
Ha! Very clever. : )
Ah, nice one. But better that way, than if you have nothing inside your head to write!
KAPOW!!....OUCH!....there goes another one!
Yowser! That's so perfect!
Very cool!
A powerful flash fiction! Like a discarded statement loaded with a fuse!
..hello.. my first time here, i think.. i must agree with you... very true that words are not meant to be kept..but rather be expressed... great read!(:
~kelvin
. . . as long as the words don't take your head with them!
Dear Mimi: Indelible are the words that make the "head" "explode"! Enjoyed! :)
Did it make a mess? LOL
and left a mess on the wall for someone to clean up...smiles.
Love it, must admit it made me smile...I have been there.
oh yes - love this completely
beware the fallout!
succinct and perfect
Quickly now, get a piece of paper! And a pen! Hurry, the stories MUST come out!
:)
We've all been there, haven't we...? Hehe...
Cheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
But what a beautiful mess they would make!
Loving this a lot. Perfect for the Nano writer in November, which is what I am.
So very true! Beautifully put.
spilling over, pouring out.... love that...
so very short. but so very...... BANG
Oh I understand this but I type it after I write it it is a good thing as I am a two fingered slow typer and I would never get the story out so explode would be the word I would use also. Am I the only one that writes on napkins and t paper when I have too? :) B
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