tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post8361445895820457418..comments2023-06-16T05:49:26.802-07:00Comments on COLLAGE PIRATE: Ice cream, Spaghetti and a Banana Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-90947808991017754422013-03-23T14:05:20.495-07:002013-03-23T14:05:20.495-07:00once I read erotica written by one of my favorite ...once I read erotica written by one of my favorite poets, MArge Piercy, I thought Oh I can make myself do this. So I did. ANd it got published and I got paid. But man. It was really hard to write about you know describing...blleccchhhhhh lolwriter-raebethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14186000192191884087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-50487820969299032752013-01-17T10:06:55.143-08:002013-01-17T10:06:55.143-08:00I love the way you wrote this, as you wrote sexual...I love the way you wrote this, as you wrote sexuality in an 'understated' way but a way which managed lead the reader to visualize which was not blatant. Nice!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-9421673860597968902013-01-17T09:14:46.671-08:002013-01-17T09:14:46.671-08:00What a refreshing poem .. I enjoyed it! I've ...What a refreshing poem .. I enjoyed it! I've hinted at, skirted around the issue of sex in my poems ... only because my kids, grandkids and sisters read what I write! I need to grow a spine.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-68968148334487954192013-01-16T22:33:45.352-08:002013-01-16T22:33:45.352-08:00Sensual..it stirs the blood but doesn't pollut...Sensual..it stirs the blood but doesn't pollute the senses...love it!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-42496304339200204482013-01-16T17:20:37.283-08:002013-01-16T17:20:37.283-08:00Whew! It's a little warm in here!Whew! It's a little warm in here!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-59143111846469192952013-01-16T16:42:38.296-08:002013-01-16T16:42:38.296-08:00This is the way I prefer to read erotic stuff--nic...This is the way I prefer to read erotic stuff--nice and misty in a pink and rose haze. I'm not very good at writing about that either--but I love what you did here. And, the banana. I'm sure Freud would have had plenty to say about that. ;_)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-64817904490681426632013-01-16T15:17:13.991-08:002013-01-16T15:17:13.991-08:00mmmmmmm
and then what?mmmmmmm<br />and then what?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-61699684703056825942013-01-16T12:54:23.996-08:002013-01-16T12:54:23.996-08:00well, i say you did a bang-up job here! hee :)
tru...well, i say you did a bang-up job here! hee :)<br />truly, i love that you do not know who Jessie is and that he has small hands. lovely!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-14888215334581903402013-01-16T09:48:23.040-08:002013-01-16T09:48:23.040-08:00I rarely write about sex, and never unabashedly. Y...I rarely write about sex, and never unabashedly. You did pretty well here, considering it's a challenge for you. Nice work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-9572924498402792152013-01-16T09:48:18.672-08:002013-01-16T09:48:18.672-08:00I rarely write about sex, and never unabashedly. Y...I rarely write about sex, and never unabashedly. You did pretty well here, considering it's a challenge for you. Nice work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-40341623900068687352013-01-16T06:57:01.245-08:002013-01-16T06:57:01.245-08:00I think you handled the subject matter very well. ...I think you handled the subject matter very well. One can write about sex without it being explicit. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-58869653704984064612013-01-06T03:01:17.277-08:002013-01-06T03:01:17.277-08:00I have to laugh.......
The title is what I ate be...I have to laugh.......<br /><br />The title is what I ate before I took a nap and had this dream.........<br /><br />The pic.....because I couldn't take a picture of what was inside my head.......<br /><br />Words come from the oddest of places.......<br /><br />Sadly, there is no more. Yellow Dog woke me up.....<br /><br />lol<br /><br />xoMimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-81610398610534471.post-91031338410194183342013-01-05T16:37:41.990-08:002013-01-05T16:37:41.990-08:00In combination the title, the picture, and the wri...In combination the title, the picture, and the writing baffle me and leave me wanting more to clear it up. I absolutely love all three!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com